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by: Louis Vutton Hand Bags

Sun, 09 Dec 2007 07:35:23 +0000

Great article.
I guess you’ll read our diary..
Thank you again

by: Mardel

Tue, 30 Oct 2007 09:38:15 +0000

Well, so far I like it. I enjoy combo werewolf/vampire novels. I would like to read a dom female taking advantage of Ramon. That might be fun.

by: Caridad Pineiro - Author of Paranormals, Romantic Suspense, Women’s Fiction and Lots More! » Blog Archive »

Sun, 28 Oct 2007 13:03:53 +0000

[…] Also, check out a new work-in-progress and leave a comment about the story and you could win a copy of an earlier release and a T-shirt. Click here for more on this contest which ends on October 31. […]

by: Ashley A

Fri, 26 Oct 2007 07:35:02 +0000

I love what I’ve read so far!! It’s really awesome!!
Ashley A

by: Beth

Fri, 26 Oct 2007 00:47:17 +0000

I love paranormals, my only issue is her name seems a little long to me - sorry just my humble opionion

by: Gayle O

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 23:27:26 +0000

It’s very good book so far. I can’t wait for the rest to see how it work out. Will Ramon partake in the Gauntlet? Will we have a third person who will blow Ramon out of Catalina mind into his heart instead? It sounds like you have the makings of a best seller.

by: Fannie

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 22:01:37 +0000

I find myself reading more paranormal books than anything else. This one has the feel of a winner. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. It is very good. I enjoyed Moon Fever anthology also. Please don’t enter me in the drawing as I already have Secret Agent Reunion. Whoever wins is in for a good read. Have a great day and take care.

by: Amelia

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 20:40:58 +0000

I’m fairly new to reading paranormals. I have yet to try any yet. I think I have some ebooks. It sounds like an interesting book. Love the cover! Thanks for sharing, Caridad!

Have a great day!

by: RachaelfromNJ

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 17:08:53 +0000

The opening paragraph should be a little more intense and captivating. The long sentences in it slow down the pace. Shorter sentences can make it more exciting. That’s just a pet peave of mine. I like to be immediately captivated by the first paragraph and first page. That’s the first taste the reader gets for your writing.

One other negative is the last name. I can’t pronounce it. And to have something I can’t pronounce, right away, in the second sentence might discourage me. I like to understand what I’m reading and if I am trying to sound out a four syllable name it might distract from the writing.

Besides that everything sounds great! The story is interesting and makes me want to read more.

I love dialogue so that’s a plus when there’s good dialogue.

Again, I am all for shorter sentences. It just makes it more intense. I like your ending. It is shorter and so the intensity is there.

‘’She had already given her heart to Ramon. Nothing her father said or did would change what she felt.'’

by: Caridad

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 15:25:54 +0000

Thanks for all the comments and please keep them coming! I’m really eager to hear everything you’ve got to say, including anything you didn’t like. All comments are good!

by: Liz Falkner

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 15:22:34 +0000

I really like paranormals and this sounds like it’ll be an interesting book. I’d love to read more

by: Nicole Price

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 14:46:53 +0000

I can’t wait to read the rest. I’ve fairly new to this genre but now I’m hooked. You have a lot of talent and I can’t wait to read more of your books.

by: Melissa K.

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 14:18:04 +0000

I think it sounds good, Caridad. However I’m not thrilled with the heroine’s last name. Too cliche.

by: Tammy G.

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 12:11:19 +0000

I’ve read a few books with Vampires and loved them. I’d love to read this too, it sounds really good!

by: Ruby Davis

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 05:36:18 +0000

I wasn’t sure about it when I read your synopsis, but then I read the excerpt. Catalina is not your average female werewolf. Definitely makes me want to read the whole book. Need to know what happens next……

by: Pamk

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 02:25:08 +0000

Okay since paranormals are my favorite genre I read them alot lol. But this one is totally different than anything I’ve read. And you absolutely can’t leave us hanging there. If you don’t get this published I want to read it anyways. lol

by: Lily

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 00:53:16 +0000

The concept seems nice… and I expect the book to be pretty hot!! And I have to say I love everything you write… so I would be willing to try this too

by: Nathalie

Thu, 25 Oct 2007 00:51:35 +0000

I am intrigued… to say the least,though I don’t know if I would by the book!

by: jeanne

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 21:39:30 +0000

This is a fairly new genre for me but after reading the excerpt I’d love to give it a chance - so put me down for loved it!

by: Pat Cochran

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 21:35:07 +0000

Caridad,

I have to be honest and tell you that
paranormals are not my most favorite
reads. I have read your “Crazy For The
Cat” which I thought was good and always try to keep an open mind when I approach a new genre.

I am fairly well taken with this excerpt. I
can already see the questions starting to
make themselves known as to the back
story that would explain how these
characters came to be. I know that I
will be looking forward to the published
version. I will want to understand how
this love story resolves itself. It is a
“reach” for me: a werewolf and a human.
Could someone risk injury with this type
of combination? Inquiring minds want
to know!!

Pat Cochran

by: S L Simmons

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 21:14:26 +0000

Sounds like a good beginning. I was a bit worried when I 1st read the description but it could be a good story. Very interested in the contest to be her mate :0

by: Linda M

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 19:13:47 +0000

To be honest, I read the description and kinda went “meh…i don’t think so, its a bit too much for me” but I was kicking back having my tea and thought “I’ll read it”.

My opinion took a 180- its a great read so far! I want more.

by: Christy H.

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 18:58:04 +0000

The excerpt is fascinating. I want to read the whole book!

by: Annette

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 18:36:26 +0000

Oh yea! I will be one of the first in line to buy this one. yea! i already love the one that you did for Moon fever and i am so ready for more. Have fun! hugs

by: Teresa W.

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 18:30:40 +0000

This is my kind of read!

by: Ember

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 17:52:08 +0000

It sounds great! I love your stories!

by: Crystal B.

Wed, 24 Oct 2007 16:24:32 +0000

Sounds great. I think it will be a fantastic read.